Rejection

20 Questions: 'Dear Younger Me...'

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By Elisa Boxer and Kjersten Hayes

Welcome back to our series, 20 QUESTIONS!

This is the place where we here at the Soaring ’20s answer questions about our debut picture book process.

We’re one month into 2020 (gasp!), looking ahead to all that awaits us during our debut year.

But we’re also looking back, taking stock of what we wish we’d known before this whole journey began.

Today’s question:

“What’s your best piece of advice for your younger author/illustrator self? “

Rajani LaRocca

Rajani LaRocca

Rajani LaRocca, author of the picture book SEVEN GOLDEN RINGS and the middle-grade book MIDSUMMER’S MAYHEM: “Lean into the stuff that makes you weird. It’s also what makes you and your writing interesting! Also, just when you’re thinking of giving up on something is when the breakthrough comes.”

Kjersten Hayes

Kjersten Hayes

Kjersten Hayes, author of THE ELEPHANTS’ GUIDE TO HIDE-AND-SEEK: “Please, younger self, stop sabotaging by rarely submitting. It can be just as painful to hide as it is to share. Also, make a fool of yourself more often — boldly saying YES to your adventurous, risky, beautiful efforts, even when they fall horribly short. Those failures are likely the exact opportunities you need to build on to make your work better. Stop being scared of your mistakes.”

Mary Wagley Copp

Mary Wagley Copp

Mary Wagley Copp, author of WHEREVER I GO: “Keep at it! It is a roller coaster of a ride, and while the lows ARE low, the highs ARE high — and worth working toward. It is okay to feel discouraged, but don’t stay in that place. Get up, dust off, and write!”

Lindsay H. Metcalf

Lindsay H. Metcalf

Lindsay H. Metcalf, author of BEATRIX POTTER, SCIENTIST and FARMERS UNITE!, and co-editor of NO VOICE TOO SMALL: “Patience, young Padawan. Don’t submit work that’s not the best thing you’ve ever written. Would you want to make a mediocre book? No. So don’t send mediocre submissions just because you’re tired of futzing with them.”

Kelly Baptist

Kelly Baptist

Kelly Baptist, author of THE ELECTRIC SLIDE AND KAI: “Don’t wait! Don’t let life get in the way of your passion. No matter how busy or complicated life becomes, you MUST make space for writing. Dreams are great, but you have to wake up and work to achieve them. Time doesn’t wait, so you shouldn’t either!”

Hope Lim

Hope Lim

Hope Lim, author of I AM A BIRD: “Your best story ideas come from personal experiences, described and retold from your own unique perspective.”

Kirsten W. Larson

Kirsten W. Larson

Kirsten W. Larson, author of WOOD, WIRE, WINGS: EMMA LILIAN TODD INVENTS AN AIRPLANE: “It’s OK to write what you love. For me, that’s true stories. There is tremendous creativity and craft in writing nonfiction, and lots of challenge too, because you have to stick to the facts.”

Anna Crowley Redding

Anna Crowley Redding

Anna Crowley Redding, author of RESCUING THE DECLARATION OF INDEPENDENCE: “Keep going. Don’t give up! Go to as many workshops and classes as possible!”

Abi Cushman

Abi Cushman

Abi Cushman, author/illustrator of SOAKED!: “Put in the work and then put it (and yourself) out there. Doing the work is the only thing you can control in this industry, plus you’ll gradually improve as you build and build upon your skillset over time. Putting yourself and your work out there allows you to develop lots of long-lasting kidlit friendships, in addition to a nice thick skin.”

Qing Zhuang

Qing Zhuang

Qing Zhuang, illustrator of HOW LONG IS FOREVER: “Invest in craft-based art classes and trust your instincts on which medium to focus on. Don’t give yourself so much pressure — You have the right to practice art in a joyful, carefree way as much as anyone else. Take care of your mental and physical health, and try not to take on too much in student loans!

Vicky Fang

Vicky Fang

Vicky Fang, author of INVENT-A-PET: “Write lots of stuff! Experiment, push, and find great partners.”

Melanie Ellsworth

Melanie Ellsworth

Melanie Ellsworth, author of CLARINET AND TRUMPET: “Just go for it! And stick with it. Listen to the critiques and edit — a lot! But don’t change your story so much that it loses its heart.”

Susan Kusel

Susan Kusel

Susan Kusel, author of THE PASSOVER GUEST: “Somebody really is going to want to publish your story based on an obscure Yiddish folktale. It will take about a decade, but don’t give up. One day you’ll see it in print. No kidding.”

Kelly Carey

Kelly Carey

Kelly Carey, author of HOW LONG IS FOREVER?: “Be patient and trust that the hard work and tentative steps outside of your comfort zone are going to bring you rewards beyond that published book proudly clutched in your hands. You’ll enjoy the long road to publication and you’ll find like-minded friends who will enrich your journey more than you can know.”

Candy Wellins

Candy Wellins

Candy Wellins, author of SATURDAYS ARE FOR STELLA: “‘Never give in. Never give in. Never, never, never, never…’ It comes from a speech Winston Churchill made during World War II, but it’s the best encouragement I’ve ever heard for doing anything that’s tough. You want to be a writer, but are scared of rejection. Ideas come easily, but you struggle plotting them. Your story has been on submission for months and you still haven’t heard anything. It’s so easy to give in. But if writing is your passion, you have to stick with it and weather all the storms.”


Now . . . over to you! What’s your best piece of advice for your younger author/illustrator self? Let us know in the comments below.





COVER REVEAL: Dozens of Doughnuts by Carrie Finison

By Carrie Finison

I am thrilled to share the cover of my upcoming picture book, DOZENS OF DOUGHNUTS, illustrated by the amazing Brianne Farley, which will be published by Putnam in July 2020.

TA-DA!

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It’s what my daughter calls a “wrap-around.” I have no idea if that is the proper term, but here’s the cover in its full, honey-dipped glory—front and back.

Jacket design and interior layout by Marikka Tamura.

I can’t tell you how incredible it is to have characters that have lived in your imagination for so long brought to life on the page. Allow me to introduce you!

The big bear with the tiny pink apron is LouAnn. She’s a baker and she has cooked up a doughnut feast as a late fall, pre-hibernation treat for herself. YUM! But just before she takes her first bite, the bell rings—ding-dong! Her friend Woodrow drops by. LouAnn is happy to share her doughnuts, but as soon as they sit down to eat—ding-dong! Clyde is at the door. One by one, LouAnn’s friends come over until it’s one big party. LouAnn makes batch after batch of doughnuts, always dividing them equally among her friends. (Yes, there’s some math involved.) But LouAnn makes one BIG miscalculation: She forgets to save any for herself!

You can imagine how a “hangry” bear might behave.

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It’s OK, LouAnn. We’ve all been there.

Presenting this cover is only one of many milestones that this book (like any) has gone through to get the publication. Every story is different, but it’s fun to look back on the twists and turns, and I thought I would share some of the milestones in the DOZENS OF DOUGHNUTS journey.

May 28, 2015: An idea!

I recorded the idea for DOZENS OF DOUGHNUTS in my Storystorm idea document. Tara Lazar’s Storystorm challenge (which at that time was called PiBoIdMo, and took place in November) was long since over, but I use the same document all year to record my ideas. I even brainstormed a few possible stanzas/rhymes that I thought might work (NONE of which made it into the final manuscript).

June 3, 2015: Draft 3 shared with the Poets’ Garage, my online poetry/rhyming critique group

I don’t usually draft that quickly, especially with a rhyming story, and looking back—it was waaay too early to share with anyone. But I was excited about the idea and the draft maybe wasn’t ALL terrible . . . only MOSTLY terrible.

July 16, 2015: Draft 6 shared in a peer critique group at a writing retreat

This was a huge moment for the manuscript because one of the other writers who was also a teacher (I’m looking at you Marcie Atkins!) suggested that I shift the story slightly so that it could be used for math instruction—showing each batch of 12 doughnuts divided equally, first by 2, then 3, 4, and 6. Brilliant!

July 22, 2015: Draft 12 shared with the Poets’ Garage . . . again

These people are saints!

January 15, 2016: Draft 29 shared with my picture book critique group

Looking back, I am SHOCKED that I did not share the manuscript with my picture book group earlier in the process because I rely on them for everything! At the same time, I was getting critiques from other sources and I’m glad I could preserve my regular group’s “fresh eyes” until later in the process on this story.

February 17, 2016: Draft 40 sent for an editor critique at the New England SCBWI conference

The number of drafts is getting high, isn’t it? When I work on a story, I save a new draft every day that I work on it. Some of these drafts represent substantial new work. Others might involve changing only a line or two.

April 30, 2016: Received editor critique at the conference

This was another vitally important step. The editor was very enthusiastic about the manuscript, had tons of great suggestions for changes, and expressed interest in seeing a revision. Yay!

July 1, 2016: Draft 54 sent to agent for feedback

I signed with my agent, Linda Epstein, in January 2016, and was excited to share this manuscript with her.

July 15, 2016: Draft 56 sent to picture book critique group . . . again

After revising a little based on my agent’s feedback, I sent it through my picture book group again. 

July 13, 2017: Draft 62 sent out on submission by agent

Did you notice a WHOLE YEAR went by? That’s because I had other manuscripts already lined up and going out on submission. Some of those got traction and even “came close” to an offer, but none of them quite made it. In July of 2017, we decided to dust off DOZENS OF DOUGHNUTS and give it a chance.

October 30, 2017: Second round of submissions by agent

During the first round of submissions, we had strong interest from a couple of editors. But after being patient and nudging for a few months, my agent got tired of waiting and fired off round 2.

November 15, 2017: An offer is made!

One of the round 2 editors was VERY interested in the story, and suddenly some of the round 1 editors were also very interested and then everything happened really fast. (Yes, fast!) I was thrilled to accept an offer from Putnam.

This seems like the end, but actually it’s only another beginning, because then I got the editorial letter (January 2018), revised multiple times, sharing with my various critique groups each time (they’re still saints!), and through several rounds of edits with my editor until finally Draft 89 was accepted as final. Whew!

Then there was the happy moment on May 3, 2018, when I learned that Brianne Farley would illustrate, and the deal was announced in Publisher’s Weekly on May 10, 2018. Then things were quiet for a long time (on my end!) until I got a peek at some sketches on January 28, 2019. From there it was just a hop and a skip (for me, not Brianne) to final art on July 29, 2019, and a final jacket on September 11, 2019.

And—WHEW—today, October 21, 2019, we get to share that cover far and wide, just 4.5 short years after my initial story idea. And there’s only a teensy bit more waiting before we can finally, FINALLY, share the whole book with you in July 2020!


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Carrie Finison writes poetry, stories, and picture books for children. Her fiction and poetry have appeared in Highlights, High Five, Ladybug, and Babybug magazines. Her debut picture book, DOZENS OF DOUGHNUTS, will be published by Putnam in 2020, with DON’T HUG DOUG following in 2021. She lives outside Boston with her husband, son, and daughter (who all love doughnuts), and two cats who allow her to work in their attic office. She is represented by Linda Epstein at Emerald City Literary.

Follow author Carrie Finison:
Website: www.carriefinison.com
Twitter: @CarrieFinison
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Follow illustrator Brianne Farley:
Website: www.briannefarley.com
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